~Chasy88

Shinizzle. Bennoda <3

Someone who can help me out there?

Tue Aug 26, 2008, 8:07 AM

Well, I know this sounds weird. But I had a little interesting thingie happen to me:

I wanted to post a fanfiction of mine at lpfiction. Well, I know my english isn't that great, at least I guess it only suck if I am writing about me - but a friend of me said it's okay like that. I only have a few grammar mistakes.

But they deleted it soon - sadly enough, I had 2 reviews *pout* - and the mail they sent me sounded like "Send your fiction to us - we read it beta for ya". Okay, I did but that is 2 weeks ago!

Nothing came back. *pouts again* And that did suck.
I mean, I think they could be honest, like: "Okay, your spelling and grammar is horrible, stop writing, yez?" But NOTHING is worse.

So ... I dunno, someone on LPfiction:com? Maybe someone who can/like to read beta a bit? Only to tell if it really suck ...

Any help would be really apprechiated!

-Chasy

A/N: And I need to say ...
Commit suicide suck, okay? Why does no one thinks about the people they left behind ...

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~damncurious

Aug 26, 2008, 8:17:58 AM

honey, as I read on LPFiction, before posting a story you have to send it to the beta team (beta.lpf@hotmail.com ) or you need a beta.. (I think that you can find one on the message board)

I don´t know.. I know Shire.Rock has a fanfic posted and DLB so try ask them how they did it.

p.s: somebody you love commited suicide?

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~Chasy88

Aug 26, 2008, 10:33:43 AM

I did, I sent them an email for betaing but there were no reply ...

(yeah someone did... *swallow deeply*

)

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~Bennoda4evr

Aug 26, 2008, 1:23:34 PM

I'm on LPfic and have been for awhile, I don't really have a beta but I guess DLB is mine kinda..cause she reads over my stories. but since I've been on there so long they don't make me send my stories to the beta team (I was on there when it was known as fanfictionlog.com)

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~Chasy88

Aug 26, 2008, 1:30:09 PM

Yeah, but they deleted my story and wrote I should send them ... but nothin' came back...

You can be glad to have a beta^^

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Bennoda A little piece of heaven.}

~Bennoda4evr

Aug 26, 2008, 1:32:50 PM

I've had a story deleted more then once, I know what that feels like..it's weird they haven't gotten back to you yet!

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RIP Erica Snyder October 8, 1971-July 9, 2009 you will be missed

~Chasy88

Aug 26, 2008, 2:07:14 PM

Well, on my german fanside they also deleted much of my stiries - but I don't get that they haven't sent it back. Seems like it was to horrible for them *drop*

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~Bennoda4evr

Aug 26, 2008, 3:28:05 PM

D: I'm sure it's not that bed, I've read some pretty bad stuff on lpfic that I can't believe got past the beta readers

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Bennoda <3

RIP Erica Snyder October 8, 1971-July 9, 2009 you will be missed

~Kyotama

Aug 26, 2008, 6:41:49 PM

What's wrong with LPF now? I'm sure I can help you out!

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~DevilsLilSista

Aug 26, 2008, 7:31:35 PM

Hey, hun! Say fuck and smile!

You really shouldn't give a damn about what other people say (Or about what they don't say) You should know, that you're a great writer. And that is all that matters.

It's easy for me to say that, because I was allways annoyed if somebody had ignored the stuff, that I made. Sometimes it seems like nobody is interested in my art or my stories.
But at the moment I can say: Fuck them!

I like my stuff. To me it's great, so I don't need their opinion.
And if that is not enough; if I am really up set with what I made because noone likes it, I'll sit down and give my fucking best. To write the best story or to paint the best picture I can.
This way of thinking is deadly relieving